Friday, November 13, 2009

Flash 55- A Princess

Flash Fiction 55
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.Here is today's story:


Everything she touched melted
until he put her hand in his pocket.
She felt something hard and it did not melt!
He put it in her mouth and it melted right away.
What was in the pants?





Why M&Ms , of course!. They melt in your mouth, not in your hand. What were you thinking?




Since I discovered it was okay I am writing a second flash 55 which will be a continuous story but a complete story every week. Here then is the thirty second chapter in the exciting ongoing adventures of Sir Laughsalot and Robberhood.

The entire story to date is HERE
The most recent chapters are HERE

Sir Knight Nite joined the Mystical Square Table.
Unlike Sir Day who was only a day Knight Sir Knight Nite was both a day knight and a night knight.
To earn his chair Nite had to fight Day.
So Kinght Nite fought Knight Day during the day because Day Knight was not a night knight.



30 comments:

Anonymous said...

Such a twisted little 55 for today! Fun.

I'm up:
Friday Flash 55 ~ DELETE

anthonynorth said...

A great sense of fun today - and with a twist so sweet :-)
Enjoyed that.

Brian Miller said...

lol. thanks for the smiles on this friday the 13th. enjoy the M&Ms. fun 55!

mne is up!

myrtle beached whale said...

I am dumber for having read this. LOL

Mike said...

I hope that I am right right that the white knight in the daylight was a good sight for the plight of the not right? LMAO!

Bubbie said...

I enjoyed BOTH of these 55's more than ever!!! Thanks for posting on mine or else I would have forgotten to look at yours. I don't post for the sake of posting or with an agenda. But as usual - yours are sooo worth the time. Thanks for TWO SMILES this morning

Dulçe ♥ said...

ha ha ha What was I thinking? Oh my! This mind of mine cannot get away from down there these days?
You naughty Knight
Very well done Dr.

Jessie said...

lol lol
good one!!!
of course it was M&M's -- the question is, plain or peanut???

smiles,

Shadow said...

a groaner you said? a clever one i say!

Alice Audrey said...

Actually, I was thinking Hershey's bar, but M&Ms works better. Because you know anything else would only get harder in the mouth. ;)

clean and crazy said...

DR.JOHN!! that was down right almost naughty!! great 55!!.

Nessa said...

Risque today.

Can I go nite night?

Flash 55 - Blue Gill

Akelamalu said...

I must have a dirty mind I was blushing reading that! :0


Good one Dr. John. :)

Susan at Stony River said...

Mercy! Dr. John!

The next time I go sticking my hand in someone else's pockets, there better be M&M's... LOL

Monkey Man said...

I never thought of anything but M&M's. I have a clean mind. Just ready by 55's. My 55 is up and here.

The neverending battle of child's opiate addiction said...

Well you had me there for a minute! Fantastic 55! Thanks for the comments over at my place and have a wonderful weekend.

One Prayer Girl said...

Naughty, naughty, but oh so funny. A 55 that made me laugh.

PG

steveroni said...

Nessa, with her "can I go nite-nite?"

Almost sounds like "can I goo wee-wee?"

Well Dr John, I thought right away M & M's...of COURSE! I mean, "What ELSE?"

Great "55"s, and Love and Peace to you too, John

Wait. What? said...

LOL! Nautghy but nice!

inappropriatesue said...

HA! I knew it was m&m's. Funny 55. THanks for visiting mine.

Tall Kay said...

It is always such a treat to visit you on Fridays! M&Ms are my favorite, so I knew where you were going...well kinda! :o)

Nighty night Sir Knight Night.

Janna said...

Now I'm craving M&M's. ;)

How fun! :)

G-Man said...

I'm, eating M&M's as I'm reading this...
So I'm thinking that I should take some insulin!
Excellent 55 Doc...
You are one in a million!
Have a Wonderful Week-End...Galen

♥ Boomer ♥ said...

You are exactly right!!! M&Ms!

Used to love those commercials! Jumping into the swimming pool of chocolate. ♥

DreamDancer said...

Hmmmm, had me going there for a moment, lol. Thanks for visiting me!

Felicitas said...

You got me! LOL! - there's nothing quite like chocolate!

Anonymous said...

OMG...very clever Dr. John. Well done. :)

Mona said...

LOL! Of course they do!

Anonymous said...

hahahaha I knew there would be a twist but it's still a good one. ;-)

hope said...

I know, I'm late. And I realized it when I was talking to someone about 55s and realized I hadn't had my weekly groan giggle. :)

You never disappoint. Hmmm, perhaps YOU should take over government. At least it would make sense then. ;)